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Now to acknowledge the proportions. I looked her up, and it seems that her nose and mouth rest a little lower on her face, and it's almost that simply. Her nose really is an awkward shape, and I think you managed to get it rather well, but it seems to be at an odd angle compared to her other features. Her face seems to be at a 3/4 view, yet her nose is more like a... 4/9 view in that it is slightly to (her right) of being straight on... Also lining the lower lip with a highlight at the base sort of changes the contour of her face.
I'm sorry for being so nit-picky, but when you're at this level, that's all I can really do to provide feedback. Also, needless to say, faces are really hard. We see, assess, and analyze them all day, so little facial burps tend to stand out. Again, sorry if you weren't inclined to receiving this sort of feedback.
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I started seeing if I could use art rage (Idk if that was what you were using to paint this) and then I fell in love with Luna's character after a HP marathon like 2 days ago so omg
this is like the perfect piece of art for me atm
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Hello there!
if i can draw as good as you do